For Heidi-Who, who requested a poem:
May. 11th, 2009 04:43 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I've known you since the womb,
And you're still a mystery to me.
So very close and yet oceans
Of time and space apart from
Each other. If once, I knew
How to open at the close,
I've forgotten now. Still
I remain hopefully aware
That one day, we will have
No secrets. United.
As we were always meant to be.
All mysteries unraveled.
And together, as in the womb, once more.
A/N: Composed in 13 minutes flat.
ETA: Added punctuation marks, which I forgot.
And the word, "as" before "in the womb". Unsure as to which version, w/ or w/out the "as", I like more.
And you're still a mystery to me.
So very close and yet oceans
Of time and space apart from
Each other. If once, I knew
How to open at the close,
I've forgotten now. Still
I remain hopefully aware
That one day, we will have
No secrets. United.
As we were always meant to be.
All mysteries unraveled.
And together, as in the womb, once more.
A/N: Composed in 13 minutes flat.
ETA: Added punctuation marks, which I forgot.
And the word, "as" before "in the womb". Unsure as to which version, w/ or w/out the "as", I like more.
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Date: 2009-05-11 11:48 pm (UTC)Here's a tutorial on how to Open At The Close if you've forgotten. ;D
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Date: 2009-05-12 12:21 am (UTC)So, poem is awesomesauce? Good!